Second Draft Analysis

After sir saw the second draft, me and our teacher had a meeting on zoom with Fatima, so that she noted all the points that sir told I  missed anything. At the this point the man problem that I was facing was that even making the video 2 times, I still wasn’t exactly understanding what my teacher was trying to convey. The mistakes that I was making was more as whole rather than some shots.

So, he explained it to me step by step what had to be done and Fatima kept taking notes. The call ended up being very helpful and now I clearly